Sunday, May 15, 2005

Judi's Artful Contest

     Never Give Up

In my mind's eye I wander perilously close to a widening deep abyss
Staring like a gongoozler into the dark void
Trying to discover a
feasible path to reach
my long lost bliss.
long lonely ARDUOUS journey to seek an 
ORACLE
My heart is all a TITTER poor NEOPHYTE seeking
a small miracle.
A FORTUITOUS ASCENDANT at the time of my
birth
Has given me a soul that is filled to the
brim with joyful mirth.
Sometimes I break into SERENDIPITOUS TARANTISM
To quelle my outward BOMBASTIC nature I sing
silently to fill the chasm.
FALLACIOUS hope springs eternal, a whispered
CONNOTATION to not give up, to stay the course
Arises like a mist deep from within me...
my life force.....

This is for the entry into this month's Artsy Contest:

http://journals.aol.com/judithheartsong/newbeginning/entries/1440

 

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

good to see your post!!  grins, debra of http://journals.aol.com/dkb11161970/DebrasDose

Anonymous said...

You used the words of Judi's dictionary challenged contest in a most flowing and poetic way. Great job!
Rebecca

Anonymous said...

I love this entry and the art work...courtenay

Anonymous said...

Fantastic entry and very poetic!!! So glad you wrote!!! judi

Anonymous said...

Great work on this poem. Good luck on your entry. You might be interested in listing your journal at http://journals.aol.com/lioneyes4you/TheUnofficialAOLJournalDirectory/.

Anonymous said...

GREAT poem and great pic!!  

You truly are artistic in many ways !!!

Stacy